Devin: "Yo gio, whaddup?"
Gio: "Hello, how are you?'
Devin: "You good? Your actin' strange"
Gio: "Just give me a minute, I'll be fine. When does this end?"
Devin: "School? Dawg, you baked? 2:15 same as ever"
Gio: "Oh yeah, just forgot"
Devin: "Been meanin' to ask you, what happend to your eyes?"
Gio: "They've always been this way"
Devin: I think I'd remember my best friend having purple eyes.." Listen, I saw you fighting that thing across the street last night.. Crazy shit"
Gio: I didn't think it'd come to this.."
(Partner: Corrado)
Thursday, April 26, 2012
B#9
Gio: "So what do you know about this planet?"
Pylo:" Very little, but I'm positive that its far enough so they can't get to you."
Gio: "Why do you say it like that, aren't you coming along?"
Pylo: "You know the position I'm in, I can't"
Pylo: "Take a disguise, while your there, remain lowkey and adapt
Gio: "I understand, and thank you for the advice old friend.
Pylo: "Just rememb..."
Gio: "NO! Get away from him!"
Pylo:" Very little, but I'm positive that its far enough so they can't get to you."
Gio: "Why do you say it like that, aren't you coming along?"
Pylo: "You know the position I'm in, I can't"
Pylo: "Take a disguise, while your there, remain lowkey and adapt
Gio: "I understand, and thank you for the advice old friend.
Pylo: "Just rememb..."
Gio: "NO! Get away from him!"
Monday, April 23, 2012
Blog 7 - hollywood formula
Opening Scene : A ominous creature that you and I would classify as an alien had been aboard a dim-lit transport ship headed towards an intergalactic prison. This would for sure foreshadow an untimely death. The creature paid no mind to the banter of the other captives, who were talking in native tongues, engaging in verbal fights. Only because a real brawl was improbable due to the shackles and chains refraining much movement. All but one creature had been participating in this ruckus among the melting pot of criminal society, he was all covered up in black rags, hiding most of his face. All seemed to be under control by the guards standing watch by all possible exits. Until the 1st sequence began..
The Big Decision: Possibly the only downfall of the form he decided to take with his time here on earth was school. On his home planet he had recieved the equivillent of a full earth education, while still in his youth. Plus, the multitude of errors in the curriculum he recieved with his time at Shawbrook High School. The day was done. He started off to the bus that would take him back to his new household. On the bus, his peers were all yelling, which has reminded him of a scene all too familiar to him. He wooking out the window as the mundayne routine of a bus ride continued, expecting nothing less than a typical spring day. Until the raid began, Gio now knew a fight was all he had left..
The Final Push: He landed a flawless strike to the chin of a guard, who wanted no more than take Gio to prison for his apparent crimes against his planet. "One down, several more to go" He quietly said to himself. Within the blink of an eye the guards increased in numbers, and began to form a enclosed ring around Gio, preventing escape. Out of the shadows of the cold winter night, a figure all too familiar approached the circle. "Gio, is it?" He said in a chuckle. "You'll regret this pointless chase, boy" Delivering a clean kick to the forehead, as if expecting a blackout. None came. he stood his own, and took the numerous strikes and blows from the surrounding guards. "Your a fool, we'll..." He couln't articulate the sentance, not knowing it was his last. The other guards watched as he was reduced to dust. An eerie glow lingered in Gio's eyes. A half a second later a bright flash ignited the town, fooling its residents into believing it was already morning..
The Big Decision: Possibly the only downfall of the form he decided to take with his time here on earth was school. On his home planet he had recieved the equivillent of a full earth education, while still in his youth. Plus, the multitude of errors in the curriculum he recieved with his time at Shawbrook High School. The day was done. He started off to the bus that would take him back to his new household. On the bus, his peers were all yelling, which has reminded him of a scene all too familiar to him. He wooking out the window as the mundayne routine of a bus ride continued, expecting nothing less than a typical spring day. Until the raid began, Gio now knew a fight was all he had left..
The Final Push: He landed a flawless strike to the chin of a guard, who wanted no more than take Gio to prison for his apparent crimes against his planet. "One down, several more to go" He quietly said to himself. Within the blink of an eye the guards increased in numbers, and began to form a enclosed ring around Gio, preventing escape. Out of the shadows of the cold winter night, a figure all too familiar approached the circle. "Gio, is it?" He said in a chuckle. "You'll regret this pointless chase, boy" Delivering a clean kick to the forehead, as if expecting a blackout. None came. he stood his own, and took the numerous strikes and blows from the surrounding guards. "Your a fool, we'll..." He couln't articulate the sentance, not knowing it was his last. The other guards watched as he was reduced to dust. An eerie glow lingered in Gio's eyes. A half a second later a bright flash ignited the town, fooling its residents into believing it was already morning..
Yeah, its that kind of story...
1. Villains have hearts too, make them have insightful dialouge as well
2. Dialouge tells a story you might not be able to do without it.
3. Make the character more of himself, not entirely based off of you.
2. Dialouge tells a story you might not be able to do without it.
3. Make the character more of himself, not entirely based off of you.
Thursday, April 19, 2012
Revision :]
A prisoner of another world crash lands on earth and takes the form of a missing boy, and inherits the struggles he had, including his fitness-fanatic parents.
Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Log-line
A prisoner of another world crash lands on earth and takes the form of a missing boy, and inherits the struggles he had, including his fitness-fanatic parents.
Wednesday, February 15, 2012
Blog #2 - My goals. 2/15/12
My goal for this semester are to better myself in writing and making my writing more clear and more understanding. I plan on using more variety of words and phrases as I go on in this semester by jotting down words I like, words that don't make sense, and really big words that I can't even pronounce. I am going to use a lot of different phrases as well. I will use metaphors and similes. I will also use phrases I have heard from people in the real world that we live in. The topics that I will be using will be a variety, like from school to home, to friends and family. Maybe even work. I will tell you about all the risks that I have taken in my life, which will pretty much amount to none... but who's counting? My tone will be from funny to serious, from sad to happy, from reflective to boring, well boring, not so much.
The thoughtfulness I will put into my stories and blogs will be from dicovering something new to something that is from my past. I will keep the reader engaged in my writing by making them think to themselves, "what will happen next?" It's a good way to make people KEEP reading. I will want to make my readers come back for more because making them come back for more is ALWAYS a good thing, if you know what I mean. I believe achieving these goals this semester will keep me writing after I graduate.
The thoughtfulness I will put into my stories and blogs will be from dicovering something new to something that is from my past. I will keep the reader engaged in my writing by making them think to themselves, "what will happen next?" It's a good way to make people KEEP reading. I will want to make my readers come back for more because making them come back for more is ALWAYS a good thing, if you know what I mean. I believe achieving these goals this semester will keep me writing after I graduate.
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